loveislove9

Sorry i haven't updated for a long time but in updating revenge is sweet soon x

Plz read my new story its called revenge is sweet. Xx

@FreshFocker yo bitch no offence its fine xx love your story. Xx

HOLA! thanks for the follow :)

Thx for the help but i changed my mind I've started the story all over again and i used your tips and i think they've helped but its still quite short I've got some writers block plz can you read it and tell me wat you think i could do next also could you plz consider co writing this story with me it would be a great help xxx

Of course, the next chapter if you do decide to do a nightmare, i think it will be a great idea. Make sure you go into detail, do not rush yourself to write it. Make sure you include how she feels, just so the reader can feel a connection. ex. "She smacked me across the face, i wish i could cry, but i cant. When i do Im only hurt more, i sat back and let her finish her work, wishing i could just end his torture." Etc. That way the reader can relate to her and have a great connection. Making the readers feel involved is a fantastic thing!!