Hey
I started reading your story
Cool and fascinating, but you better read the narrative again
You are using our common chat language in the story how we use while chatting on mobiles
Where most of the places you kept “u”& “ur” in the areas of You, your and all
And there are a few more chat languages you better edit next time
I too write in same mode sometimes without knowing it by myself when my friend corrected me after reading it same way as I am correcting you now
Your friendly neighbour Just trying to help the fellow author
Don't take my words in a wrong way, I hope you understand the fellow author concern. Who is watching out for you girl
Love you girlllllll
