lovely_sakura07

Chapter 9: Brawl Battles ft. The "Pro" Teaser: 
          	() = it was italtic 
          	
          	"I'm glad you noobies could make it!" 
          	
          	He stepped forward and began to pace around, looking at the three of them standing in a row. 
          	
          	"Since I'm such a pro and very experienced, I will be your Pro Brawl Battle expert today! No need to thank me; I know, I know." 
          	
          	Clancy rolled his eyes and looked away, disinterested. (Hmph! He looks like the NOOB here!) Clancy mocked internally.
          	
          	Berry just tiredly looked at him. (*Sigh* Today's gonna be a slow one, huh?) Berry huffed in thought.
          	
          	While Y/N just began to adjust their detective coat. (I wonder if Colt has ever been told he has a very punchable face?) Y/N simply thought.
          	
          	"It almost feels like yesterday I was in your position. Except more better, obviously."
          	
          	"You noobs will experience chaos. Panic. And importantly..... The taste of victory! That all will be thanks to my expert advice—" 
          	
          	"AHEM!" Clancy interrupted.
          	
          	"Uh. What is it? I was in the middle of my speech." Colt rudely asked. He stopped pacing around and folded his arms. 
          	
          	"I actually have PLENTY of experience in the.... (Battlefield)." Clancy spoke with emphasis on the last part, "I believe I don't need any of this introduction stuff! I've been through WAR!" 
          	
          	"... Uh. Yeah, sure." Colt dismissively waved the guy off. 
          	
          	"Anyway. You'll never be prepared for the chaos Brawl Battles brings! Without me, that is. But—" 
          	
          	Berry held up his hand. 
          	
          	"AW COME ON! What is it?!" Colt shouted at him.

lovely_sakura07

@lovely_sakura07 Honestly, sometimes! Mostly bc I reach a point where I dont know what to write or I dont feel the motivation to continue writing that part. Tho most periods I just do my work; except for my lunch sometimes.
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bikibakaboko

Oooh, hereaaaa, haha! Hey, Do you have periods when you don't feel like writing? Not because you're tired, but just because you don't want to? 
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lovely_sakura07

Chapter 9: Brawl Battles ft. The "Pro" Teaser: 
          () = it was italtic 
          
          "I'm glad you noobies could make it!" 
          
          He stepped forward and began to pace around, looking at the three of them standing in a row. 
          
          "Since I'm such a pro and very experienced, I will be your Pro Brawl Battle expert today! No need to thank me; I know, I know." 
          
          Clancy rolled his eyes and looked away, disinterested. (Hmph! He looks like the NOOB here!) Clancy mocked internally.
          
          Berry just tiredly looked at him. (*Sigh* Today's gonna be a slow one, huh?) Berry huffed in thought.
          
          While Y/N just began to adjust their detective coat. (I wonder if Colt has ever been told he has a very punchable face?) Y/N simply thought.
          
          "It almost feels like yesterday I was in your position. Except more better, obviously."
          
          "You noobs will experience chaos. Panic. And importantly..... The taste of victory! That all will be thanks to my expert advice—" 
          
          "AHEM!" Clancy interrupted.
          
          "Uh. What is it? I was in the middle of my speech." Colt rudely asked. He stopped pacing around and folded his arms. 
          
          "I actually have PLENTY of experience in the.... (Battlefield)." Clancy spoke with emphasis on the last part, "I believe I don't need any of this introduction stuff! I've been through WAR!" 
          
          "... Uh. Yeah, sure." Colt dismissively waved the guy off. 
          
          "Anyway. You'll never be prepared for the chaos Brawl Battles brings! Without me, that is. But—" 
          
          Berry held up his hand. 
          
          "AW COME ON! What is it?!" Colt shouted at him.

lovely_sakura07

@lovely_sakura07 Honestly, sometimes! Mostly bc I reach a point where I dont know what to write or I dont feel the motivation to continue writing that part. Tho most periods I just do my work; except for my lunch sometimes.
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bikibakaboko

Oooh, hereaaaa, haha! Hey, Do you have periods when you don't feel like writing? Not because you're tired, but just because you don't want to? 
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lovely_sakura07

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Chapter 8: The Junkers & Retropolis Gang Teaser: 
          
          "I happened to notice your eye bags and did a scan..." Oh no. "I detect you have not gotten proper sleep in months! Are you alright?" Nani asked, looking at me with her one eye concerningly. 
          
          With this job and the stupid shit that happens here.... 
          
          I'll probably never get proper sleep. 
          
          Also, those late night grinds. That, too. 
          
          I shouldn't have been surprised that she had a feature like that. She was created to take care of Jessie after all. 
          
          Now, begins this awkward conversation that I don't wanna have!
          
          "Enough to keep me awake, Nani, but I am working on it! Don't worry about it..... (Cant italicized here so imagine this last part is italtic)" I happily state in order to try and please her. Larry's pestering about my health is enough for one day. 
          
          "Y/N! How many hours have you slept last night?" (Cant italicized here so imagine this is italtic)
          
          "Y/N! I hope you know the correct amount of hours a teenage like yourself is 12 hours!" (Cant italicized here so imagine this is italtic)
          
          "Y/N! Please get some sleep! Plus, I have noticed you have not eaten anything today." (Cant italicized here so imagine this is italtic)
          
          *Sighhh*
           

lovely_sakura07

I just realized I was so wrapped in college stuff that THAT THE ANNIVERSARY FOR THE STARR PARK DETECTIVE PASSED!??! 
          (4/7/24)
          
          2k reads (at least 100 views per chapter) in over a year is great, and I truly appreciate the support! Time flies by when you're having fun, huh? 
          
          Man I would have been cool if my planned arc to be anniversary, but oh well, live happens lol. 
          
          I think post two teasers consider the great process I've made with the two chapters! Which Chapter 9 is at the middle part, and Chapter 8 is completed but unproofread. 
          

lovely_sakura07

OMG I ACCIDENTALLY PUBLISHED CHAPTER 9. This was like serval hours ago but shhhh. 
          
          Sorry about that! Which I'll take this time to update yall on Chapter 9: Brawl Battles ft. The "Pro"
          
          FIRST TWO SCENES ARE DONE! And I personally I think that the beginning of the chapter is the best one if written so far. I'm right now still working on it but the process has been going well! 
          
          That's all! Peace~!

bikibakaboko

@ lovely_sakura07  i know one interesting thing: The Coming chapter will be remarkable! 
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lovely_sakura07

Also, I'm making a oneshot based on a gartic phone match me & my friends and I had where it was just Toodles from Dandy’s World on Roblox gambling on red in a casino. So yeah. 
          
          The chapters will come first, dw. I'm just letting yall know in case yall are a fan of Dandy’s World, too. 
          
          (Def want to make a fanfic on Dandy’s World at some point, but after TSPD is done)

lovely_sakura07

@Markssmman Its a game where you & ur friends write prompts and draw them. Then you get a drawing & write what you see, trying to keep it the same throughout the game until the match is done! Also I'm happy ur happy im alive :)
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bikibakaboko

@ lovely_sakura07  hole mole, she is alive, hehe, im happy
            
            (WHAT IS GARTIC PHONE, EVERYONE AROUND ME KNOW IT AND ONLY I DONT... im so Non-social) 
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lovely_sakura07

Heyo yall! Lovely here. 
          
          Great news; Chapter 8: The Junkers & The Retropolis Gang is almost done (un-proofread). So soon, I'll be able to start writing.... 
          
          Chapter 9: Brawl Battles ft. The "Pro" 
          
          Then, proofread them both & send them out to yall! 
          
          Spring Break is over, unfortunately, but I'm going at a nice pace for once. Hopefully, school will be less busy for me now. That's all for news.
          
          Peace~! 

lovely_sakura07

OMG, HEYO YALL! 
          
          I have been VERY busy irl, so much I forgot I wrote The Starr Park Detective (TSPD). 
          
          But! It's spring BREAK! I HAVE FREEDOM!!!!So the plan:
          
          - Save the Valentine's Day Special for next Valentine's as I didn't notice I hadn't released it until now. 
          
          - BUT! In exchange, TWO— You heard me right— TWO CHAPTER WILL BE RELEASED TOGETHER! No date pin-pointed yet. 
          
          I will be working all week to get you these chapters to make up for my mistake.
          
          These chapters are....
          
          Chapter 8: The Junkers & Retropolis Gang 
          
          (Which is Y/N getting a weapon created from the Junk Yard trio & run into some trouble from the Retropolis Gang on the way!)
          
          & 
          
          Chapter 9: Brawl Battles ft. The "Pro"
          
          (Colt teaching Y/N the art of brawling! Chaos & pain ensue; R-T gets revenge, Brock being a fellow gamer, and an unexpected team up?!?!)
          
          Hope yall have a good day! I'm glad to be working this again, Peace~!

IDK5577822

@lovely_sakura07. YAY, thanks! Have a great spring break too
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