So, I can't comment on your book (or any book for that matter) so here's my form thing:
Name- Angel Rose Weasley
Age/Year- 15/5
Crush- Harry Potter
Blood Status- Halfblood
Type- Romantic and you can make it dirty if you want, I don't really mind.
Backstory- When I was 5 months old my parents dropped me off at the door step of the Weasley's house. They did this because they said that I would be safer with the Weasley's then with them. I don't really know still my parents, but I try not to think about it to much because I have a family who loves and cares for me. The Weasley's legally adopted me. I am now their eldest daughter.
If you need to know anything else, don't be afraid to message me or anything! :)
Thank you thank you thank you sooo much if you do this! You don't have to but I would be very happy if you could. Thank you again!