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what story are you going to write the feedback in but thats ok

@loverforhp99 right now I’m writing two stories at once so I will read your story and give you some advices in the comments if that’s okay

im also having a bit of writers block so feel free to give me ideas. the story is abt a girl called rachel malfoy who falls in love w/ james potter but they get seperated in a manor and have to fight for love
          	  here is the link
          	  https://glowscotland-my.sharepoint.com/:w:/r/personal/gw14macloedcharlotte_glow_sch_uk/Documents/Personal%20Folder/word/the%20mystery%20of%20the%20manor.docx?d=w42026b7af8f246a6b37ce3f84428c88e&csf=1&web=1&e=vuRkwd