lovesickgrave

Hello!
          	I’m looking for constructive feedback on my story The Misfit Chronicles.
          	
          	It’s a school-based drama with humor and strong character dynamics.
          	Any thoughts on pacing, dialogue, or characters would mean a lot. Thank you!
          	https://www.wattpad.com/story/405672446

btswrites05

Hey there,
          If you don’t mind would you please look into my story. 
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/398395554?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=btswrites05
          
          I will be waiting for your response. 
          Do vote and share your response in comment section  

btswrites05

@btswrites05 thank you so much I'll for sure continue itt
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lovesickgrave

@btswrites05 honestly u should continue 
            It's good the emotion the way you showed it 
            The choas everything is perfect you can do much better it's good 
            Keep writing!
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