lovesoobs
hi <3
lovesoobs
may_bornmia
Hey, love, would you mind reading and reviewing my book? It could help me improve my writing significantly.
Here's the link:
https://www.wattpad.com/story/231920266-sugar-daddy-%C2%BB-bangchan
Have a lovely day!! :)
may_bornmia
@lyhyunjinnie hey! Thank you so much for reading so far! I'm glad that you enjoyed it, and I'm definitely not offended by the nit-picking, haha! I need to improve, and your helping me so I'm really grateful for that. I'll try incorporating more details and improving on the area you told me to work on. Thank you so much again!! ❤️✨
lovesoobs
@may_bornmia hihi! I hope your well and you’ve had a nice week!! I’ve just finished reading upto chapter 38 and so far I’m loving the book!! It’s in such a cute story and I love the characters! The format is so easy to read and the I love the inside jokes you’ve included too!! However, if you don’t mind me sharing with you and I hope you don’t get offended! I do have a a nit-pick about the book, some of the descriptions for me are a bit bland. But, I want you to keep in mind that might be my personal preference, I thought I’d still share it with you. All in all, I hope your not hurt by this, I really love the book and I thought I help you a bit. Your such a wonderful author and a lovely person! Please don’t take my nit-picks to heart! <3 Thank you lyhyunjinnie / lilac <3