lovetoread128

thnx everyone who has supported this book so far it truely means alot to me so thanks to all my doves out there

bluecat1R

I think to make what you've written so far even better you should consider adding more description to the characters feelings and the first scene into the book when she is being chasing. But then again I don't really have that much experience with book writing so feel free to ignore what I have written.☺

lovetoread128

@bluecat1R no thnx alot for ur input i really appreciate it and will take it under consideration when i revise my story
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