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d4nie5
I'm gonna be real honest with you, so the pov is good,very good and the way you describe the moments is very good well apart from a few English mistakes but hey mistakes are common I also make them and also the story has potential I mean 35 reads with 3 parts is a good start I wish u all the best,have a blessed day
lucia1ovv3
@d4nie5 ohh thank you so much thank you for you support ,you too have a good day❤️