lotto545
Hey there, ellmcl, welcome to wattpad. Thank you so much for following
lotto545
@lotto545 how so with what? The dialogue? Well you've formatted your dialogue like a script so Name: "Dialogue", which like I said is perfectly fine and a lot of stories on wattpad do the same, but traditionally dialogue in books is formatted "Dialogue" said (or other descriptive) Name. Again you're fine leaving it how it is I just like giving little tips every now and then