lucyforever

Hey havent heard from you in a while... everything okay? 

Hi, 
          It appears that people think the story "its a nice girl thing" moves to fast so I am going to re-do it in a different way so that it is the same story but it might slow down the plot slightly.
          Please let me know which one you think i should continue with. 
          x

@ReikoJ Thank you. Would you still be willing to edit my story? 

Of course I don't completely hate your story! It is a good story! 

@ReikoJ  If you don't mind editing it then that would be great. Can you also tell me what u think of it? You can be as honest as you like. Good and bad feedback will be appreciated. Thank you xx

Hello there. I responded to you in the forum, and I would like to know if you want me to edit it for you, or just tell me what I think about it. I'll be happy to edit it for you, and if you just want me to tell you what I think, I'll keep it light and general. :)