lukes!

okay so quick rant about this next piece
          (I'm a strong believer that explaining art sometimes cheapens it so I'll do my best to avoid doing that)
          
          this one is pretty much the oldest one i have, and it started as this whole concept piece that came from my very strong opinions on the whole concept of Christianity, and how I never ever felt like it made too much sense under scrutiny.
          the thing is, I never got around to actually writing it, I just put a line into it and left it for years and years; whenever I'd come back to it, it never felt right to add anything else, and I didn't know why, until it kinda clicked for me: this is the whole crux of the story from my very specific view.
          I won't try to explain it, because honestly where this piece shines is making YOU reader question it and come to YOUR conclusion on what it's about, and I'd honest to the gods love to hear your opinion on it!
          Anyways here's Cain: 
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/313206441?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_reading&wp_page=reading&wp_uname=ludensnakes

okay so I fucking hate haikus they equate impact to the reduction of itself and the 5-7-5 is just gnarly to hit especially if you're writing on your second/third language (like I am) but I'll be honest there's a poem of mine that was supposed to be a haiku (the one titled Bittersweet) and it was going to be a haiku and I chickened out at the midway but like the idea always stuck with me so I kinda learned how to make them out of sheer spite and disgust quite literally just so I can say I can make them and still hate them but now I'm kinda in that state where you've spent so long trying to do something that it's the only thing you can think about so I've made a fuckton of haikus so...... maybe i'll post a few of them? haha?
          
          btw I remade Bittersweet into an actual haiku and it's pretty dope but I feel like posting two versions of the SAME thing is kinda redundant so maybe that one is gonna stay on the realm of imagination for u guys sorry lol

i had to get a little bit of life sucked out of me to be able to come back to this app and even think about writing whole pieces instead of just tweeting excerpts like a broken dispenser (this and I actually broke my phone and just now got the courage to download this on my new one) but regardless it DOES feel like a comeback is underway maybe idk no promises let's see
          
          also my poems are like so messy and out of any kind of order I'd like them to be and that's been a little unmotivating but fuck it we ball I make and fix my own mess
          
          
          
          bare your teeth guys it's the reason we have em

Hi so I posted a little something that I really need your opinion on!! Like now!! And I miss you!! 

I am a 14 year old writing enthusiast and you are one of my role models. I would be honored to know that you had the time to read my poems. 
          
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/385306578?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=KadiKabinet

so lol just a funny little thought/note i just noticed that the animal imagery on my writing's been through the roof these days and i couldn't get why until i looked in the mirror and said out loud "you're a damn vet student of fucking course, I'm surprised it took you this long to fall into the animal™ pit dumbass" but anyways the next one i post's gonna be a doozy so hold tight

@ __evemarie  A SIGNED COPY??? BABY AT THIS POINT I'M WRITING YOU INTO THE PROLOGUE, INTO THE DEDICATORY and let's be honest there's gonna be at least a couple written just for you

@ __evemarie  I swear to God eve if it wrecks me I'm knocking on your window tonight watch out sis

@ __evemarie  AND IT SUCKS but what's even funnier is that I get emails from the app warning me but my email's been doing the same 

not to sound needy, but um !! I wrote something !! and I need your opinion, okay!! I’m tired of checking this app to see if you liked it or not !!