@porrneasianparrapio omg how is this your first time writing?? in "shadows between us" - the prologue immediately pulled me in - it feels cinematic, like I can see the whole city setting in my head. and chapter one?? the tension between sena and heeseung was so intense, I literally got goosebumps reading it. the way you built the atmosphere - the cold night air, the glowing red eyes, the 'nightmare' line - it's honestly addictive. I'm already invested in their dynamic and curious how fate is going to play out. you have such a natural storytelling voice, I can't wait to see how the slow-burn unfolds in the next chapters.
