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lula244
Sep 16, 2013 03:45AM
would love some constructive critisism guys, thinking about changing it and making it move a bit slower, thoughts??View all Conversations
Story by Sara Hassan
- 1 Published Story
Ordinary...Or not?
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Valerie is an ordinary girl in her last year of high school, but when the ruggedly handsome Kane arrives and...