lulucutiepie123

Hey, everyone!
          	
          	I’m working on a story centered around my character, Estella, and I’ve already written five chapters. Before I officially post them, I’d love to get some feedback to make sure the story flows well and the characters are engaging.
          	
          	I already have a solid general idea and outline, but I’m looking for someone who can offer constructive feedback on plot, pacing, and character development. If anyone is willing to give it a read and share their thoughts, I’d really appreciate it!
          	
          	Thanks in advance for your help! :)

lulucutiepie123

Hey, everyone!
          
          I’m working on a story centered around my character, Estella, and I’ve already written five chapters. Before I officially post them, I’d love to get some feedback to make sure the story flows well and the characters are engaging.
          
          I already have a solid general idea and outline, but I’m looking for someone who can offer constructive feedback on plot, pacing, and character development. If anyone is willing to give it a read and share their thoughts, I’d really appreciate it!
          
          Thanks in advance for your help! :)

lulucutiepie123

FOUND IT......well essiemission found it and I am really greatfull towards her THANK YOU essiemission you are an angel.
          
          So the story is called "Heat waves" by curly-bangtan.tumblr.com
          
           its not on watpadd beacause it was said that another writer plagilarized curly's story. The person who plagiarized called the story "sexual tension" but since it was plagiarized it is not on watpadd anymore. 
          
          so the story is on tumblr!!!!!!!! AGAIN THANK YOU ESSIEMISSION FOR FINDING IT AND THANK YOU EVERYONE WHO HELPED AND WAITED FOR THE STORY TO BE FOUND!!!!!

SakuLee26

Hello ❤
          Thank you so much for adding my book YOUR EYES to your reading list I hope you'll enjoy reading this book. 
          
          Take care ❤❤❤

SakuLee26

@ LucianadosSantosVale  I'm so happy that you came here to read my story  
            TT TT this made me happy I could cry happy tears. Yt deleted my account and videos because it was too sexy...I'm glad you came here❤❤❤
            
            If you liked my story please vote for each chapter (the star button) that would mean a lot to me❤❤❤
            
            I hope I'll see you around here on wattpad. Here are many many great authors ❤❤❤
            
            Take care honey.
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lulucutiepie123

@SakuLee26  hii, I love your ff, I saw this one on youtube and fell in love with the story and everything, but when I went there again to see the 2 part, I didnt find your account, luckly I took a screenshoot of your page to remenber your @name and downloaded wattpad to finsh your story❤ best dicision ever, thank you
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