luna_star131

Chapter 10 of The Heartless Heiress is now out!

Elusahsia

Hey,
          
          I would love a review. I have multiple genres you could choose from. Kindly let me know your preference and if I could send them over. Thanks!

luna_star131

@Elusahsia I read the first chapter of your book and I think it’s really good it has an interesting plot and ending it on a cliffhanger is great as it will captivate the reader and make them want to read more. Your storytelling is clear and everything is presented neatly. My only thing I think you could add just to make it even better is using more complicated or descriptive words or just a bit more detail in your writing. But that’s just something you can add nothing to change. Overall I think it’s a great story and you should be proud. :)
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Elusahsia

@luna_star131 no worries! Try this one then:
             https://www.wattpad.com/story/388551894?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Elusahsia
            
            Incase link is not clickable, go to profile, the book I AM WOMAN. Can't wait to hear your feedback!
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luna_star131

Hi, 
            
            That would be no problem. Sorry for the late reply I love all kinds of genres so just send which ever  one you want over and I’ll have a read. <3
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