
RURIOT
Hei sweetie! I've read all yo work & its very good! 1 thing; stop self-critics, its a huge turnoff to a reader,have more confidence coz u r marvelous, a gud story doesn't necessarily have to be long, short stories doesnt show lack of talent,it shows how gud u r to take events & put them in a more understandable & entertaining for the reader,ok... Otherwise,all the best dear!