lusira2bisai2

What am I currently writing? My thesis. Oh how time flies.

cheesehead

Hey Cheesehead here! 
          thanks so much for fanning me 2 ur library! sorry im getting back 2 u so late! I jst got ur message(s)! About the chat: you have to fan people or hav ppl fan u in order 2 tlk 2 ppl on chat!
          But I jst got ur comment for Forgive Me. I wasn't persay upset with it bc i asked for constructive critism but im rele sensitive about Forgive Me and Please Be There and Waiting! Waiting bc it wwas the first one i uploaded to wattpad (one of my first stories) and Forgive Me and Please Be There bc i liked it at first but then it became a drag to right and I felt lik it was getting rele bad! I wrote tht I thought they were bad bc I rele do think tht wen I was posting it! I made them a little sappy bc I had so many bad parts in it tht I wanted it to be at least a little bit happy!! 
          Then the thing with the brothers being so considerate…I have cousins: Five older brothers and one baby girl. Even though the sister is a baby they still adore her soooo much! They take pictures with her and always want to hold her and make nicknames for her and that was what I was basing the brothers and Julia off of. I added Jackie so that Jul was able to have a best friend and someone she was always able to turn to that was more than her brothers ever would be! So sorry if it became predictable or tht u didn’t lik Jackie and Julia’s relationship but thts jst how it turned out!
          Jst wanted to get a little bit of my say!
          Once again im not upset bc I DID ask for criticism! 
          Cheesehead
          Ps. Regarding ur question if I was sure about my facts. Pneumonia= yes (well from what I looked up online) but cancer= no. jst a wild guess and I was hoping it was close!!