Hi! I've read your story and it's no nice, i was engrossed. I like the characters and how the story was being build. Its a good book to be published if i were to be asked. And i hope this book of yours will. I am looking forward for this to be finished and i'll see what i can do more, more than sharing this to my friends.
I would also suggest on the couple characters that there would be more intimacy on the story to match the deep and broad problems in the story to make this book more interesting. It's a perfect spice on both the climax romance and the climax problem on it.
Lastly, don't give up on this book, i certainly believe that this book will achieve greater. Credits to your beautiful thoughts and experiences + imaginations. You are a beautiful work of God. Credits to you and all credits be to God. May your heart continue to love no matter what.
Truly,
Hazel.
