luvcroix

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cosmonism

hello! i hope i'm not bothering you, haha. 
          i just started my first haikyuu fanfic, and i
          was wondering if you could check it out...
          your feedback would mean the world   to
          me :) here's a short description:
          
          "i could bow to your intelligence if it 
          meant you'd spend a night with me."
          
          in which london's most 
          wanted   criminal  finds
          shelter     in      a      witty
          detective's arms. 
          
          "lord forgive me if i ever spent a 
          minute near you."
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/245209817--•-k-tetsurō
          
          thank you so much!
          signing off,
          — m.

cosmonism

im so so sorry to bother you, but i was wondering if you could please check out my book "rogue - english version"... i translated it - it was originally in my first language, portuguese - and really wanted a bit of feedback as to how i can improve my writing! if you don't wanna give feedback, that's fine too! it would mean the world to me if you could read it :) here's a description:
          Free yourself from your roots.
          ******
          Kappa was never one to follow the rules but, out of fear, he always did. His footsteps guided him along the usual, routined path, but his eyes searched for any source of adrenaline. The war dragged on before his eyes, time like sand. Even so, Kappa was not like those terrorist rebels who frightened innocent villages. After all, staying on the fence was his specialty.
          But when an enigmatic letter arrives in his mail, everything is about to change.
          here's the link: https://www.wattpad.com/story/241433696-rogue-english-version-%E2%9C%94 
          i hope you like it!

YERiWINKLE

⚠️ATTENTION ⚠️
          
          You have been choose to be showered with love ♥︎♥︎♥︎ So enjoy!
          Now post this to everyone’s wall , who you think deserves the world,  if you get❣︎❣︎❣︎❣︎
          
          1 back ~ your loved♫
          2 back ~ your popular ☾
          3 back ~ you are on the most loveable people♡︎
          9 back ~ wow, I’m jealous ♥︎♥︎♥︎
          
          Don’t break the chain unless you want to break someone’s heart ☻︎☻︎☻︎☻︎☻︎

luvcroix

@-yeojinluvbot 
            
            :: aw~ this is so sweet (◕ω◕) 
            i'll not break the chain uwu
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