etherealswansong

i just read your story and its totaly dope! keep writing.
          i have a story of my own that i would love if you read. here's an excerp:
          "Why can't I be like a normal guy?:
          Making out with any hot chick I can get my hands on. 
          Eyes filling with need, as Jessica and her croud sit down at lunch in mini skirts and shirts tight enough to suffocate.
          Dying to shag the "sexy as hell" bio teacher.
          Thinking of ways to get the less stupid drunk girl out of a party and into the warmth of my king size bed.
          Instead I spent my time watching football players in their tight pants and male lifeguards at the beach.
          Pathetic."
          its my first story so tell me what you think and vote if you like it! thank you.
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