djbutton

hey Anna u know I am not a country girl and we aren't really that old so could you put down the age and put some more dialog in the story it is kinda boring and don't start everything with the same word sorry if this sounds rude but I am just giving advice. Also try and put some action and don't make it all about you.. Again sorry if this message sounds rude...

djbutton

@djbutton okay thanks
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luvwriting10

@djbutton I am glad you actually read it mmmk yeah I will make some tweaks
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Bewarefangirl

I wanna thank you for voting for all of my chapters it makes me know people are actually enjoying my work.:)

lillithtaylor

@luvwriting10 thanx for following me
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