lxoneene

Hey guys! i’m writing up the new chapter and realized i have a lot of filler / internal dialogue, is that bothering anyone ?

rolipolii_

No twin it’s okay 
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lxoneene

just a little reminder guys, i don’t proofread unless necessary, someone said that the consistent wrong pronouns being used (which if i’m correct only happened once ) is messing them up. 
          
          if i feel any type of discomfort from a comment it will be deleted okay, i don’t like feeling a sort of way when this book is just for fun. i love that you guys are enjoying it as much as i am writing it but please bare with me. 
          
          if my mistakes are bothersome i am sorry and if it is bothering to the point your growing irritated from it, you can find a new book. i don’t want to sound rude or harsh but it’s getting to the point where i don’t even want to write anymore if it keeps getting bought up.
          
          i stated before, i don’t proofread. i’ll fix grammar mistakes once all the rest of my chapters are released.
          
          thank you

buckysmetalarm08

I literally don’t even notice them most of the time! This is my favorite story at the moment and I would hate for rude people to ruin it. That being said you are an amazing writer <3
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ohilovebeingafangirl

I actually hate that people keep pointing it out especially since it’s clear how hard u work on this story and I just feel a bit heart broken every time you apologize over minor mistakes that don’t affect the story at all
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rolipolii_

I lowk enjoy finding the lil mistakes  they make me giggle sometimes but I more often than not js read through em bc ik what it is ur saying 
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lxoneene

Something just made me want to rant which is regarding the whole netflix documentary that they decided to drop after Michael’s movie coming out which i’m still disgusted by. 
          
          someone over on my tiktok made a comment regarding such allegations saying ‘so whose going to tell her what he did.’ like oh, you mean the fact that he did nothing?? literally proven innocent several times and investigations still found NOTHING even over the years. it’s honestly disheartening to see people quickly switch over once they get the slightest amount of doubt. 
          
          even know he has to fight for his innocence and he isn’t even here to do so himself..with people being so quick to believe it’s honestly crazy. someone even said ‘idk what to believe anymore.’ like honey if you don’t know anymore then you were never a fan. 
          
          sorry for the rant and spam but i just thought this was of importance to bring attention to. 

lxoneene

@Youroneandonlypookie exactly i saw a clip where someone literally cut off a part that was completely a regular conversation, making it look bad for no reason. it’s so sad and upsetting 
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Youroneandonlypookie

I had seen some clips from the documentary and I hate the fact that they used some videos  that he was in with a kid and cutting to a part where it makes him look like he’s someone he’s not and everyone is believing it and I hate that they just believe everything they see  
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lxoneene

not a new chapter guys! it’s a update. i didn’t know that at the end of the chapter the original question y/n asked was weird so I updated it to say something else. sorry if i creeped anyone out with that i thought it was fitting and cute for the scene so, sorry!

rolipolii_

@lxoneene  it’s a very normal question twin, I think theeee most normal question to ask someone lmao, but igu either way 
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lxoneene

@rolipolii_ Y/n had asked Michael if he ever wanted kids and he said yes to, she had been holding her baby cousin while she asked it so i thought it was fitting for the moment  but i changed it since i just want to make sure everyone enjoys the story and it comfortable 
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rolipolii_

WAIT WHAT DOD IT SAY I DONT REMEMBER 
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lxoneene

okay loves, don’t hate me just yet but i’ve been working on another story if you follow my tiktok you know i’ve started another fic on how to lose a guy in 10 days which is a movie but replacing the main characters with Michael and you! so for tonight instead of updating Heaven can wait which will pick up when i wake up i wanted to release the first teaser to how to lose a guy, so let me know if you like it, let me know if that’s something you would want to see, love you all!