lynne22

yep! :)

Aetila

@lynne18 I'm so sorry about that >.>
          My computer doesn't register comments correctly; but thank you so much for not just ignoring me!
          I'll definitely go and read yours too! xDD
          Oh, and if you're still interested in a sypnosis; here:
          
          Golden Dawn--Karis Gebelin moved to Manhattan.
          From that point on, goodbye sunny beaches of Hawaii; and hello future socialite and obsessive top student and careerist.
          A fortune teller as a side job, Karis doesn't believe a thing she forecasts--she's a bookworm who secretly dreams of living in her stories.
          
          But be careful what you dream of, because you just might get it--as one day, Karis finds that the wealth and splendor she'd do almost anything to get might be guaranteed--that is, if she survives. 
          
          Elven Mob Bosses And Rebel Heirs--Welcome to a world where elves,well, aren 't your fairy tale elves. Rule d in a ochlocracy, of Oligarch s and tech savvy megacorporati ons, of underworld criminal ru le, resistance in this mobocra cy is futile when your King ca n be your dishwasher in one da y. Intergalactic bestseller an d future Oligarch, Kronos fød t av Mørke’skala soon finds out how his fickle world migh t change--with his help too.

lynne22

@Aetila ok i'm gonna be completely honest with u it would be great if u could read my stories, but i really can't understand much of wut u just wrote me so i'll go to your profile and start reading them. but i dont' really understand wut u wrote.

Aetila

Hey there! 
          I'm new to Watt pad, and I was wondering if yo u could read one of my stories and comment on it! (voting, f anning, and whatever are all o ptional, its the reviews I nee d!) I'd love to return the fav or, and I will! 
          I know this mig ht annoy you, but anything is greatly appreciated! Thanks fo r reading this! 
          -Celeste 
          My Stories--Gol den Dawn; Karis Gebelin was ju st your typical Hawaii transpl ant to Manhattan, obsessive to p student who actually procras tinates everything, and bound of Ivy; future careerist and c urrent fortune teller. Until-- that is--she finds out everyth ing she aced is more or less a ben trevato--so goodbye model student and striving socialit e--and hello demonslayer/alche mist and automatic industry ty coon--that is, if she survives. 
          
          Elven Mob Bosse s and Rebel Heirs--Welcome to a world where elves,well, aren 't your fairy tale elves. Rule d in a ochlocracy, of Oligarch s and tech savvy megacorporati ons, of underworld criminal ru le, resistance in this mobocra cy is futile when your King ca n be your dishwasher in one da y. Intergalactic bestseller an d future Oligarch, Kronos fød t av Mørke’skala soon finds out how his fickle world migh t change--with his help too.

mebby88

Hey, sorry these messages are annoying. But, i was wondering if you had any free time, can you check out my story Pure Bliss 
          It's about vamps/werewolves, has suspence, & parts are funny! 
          Please tell me what you think,That would be awesome! But if you don't, that's fine. Thank you!! :) 
          ~Mebby88