Hello I read your story and I liked that
You should CONTINUE ; END the story and Making a sequel!!!!
... But please you should revise grammar mistakes I've seen a lot there !
I was thinking about what Alaina will do... I think she should make her own decision for once , she suffers and suffers ....
From my point of view she should escape I don't know how because it is hard but I imagined she fakes her death somehow , or killing a girl who resembles her in order to put an end to what she WAS , so Alaina is officially DEAD , everybody has to think that she committed SUICIDE
So she escapes , assuming another identity, putting male clothes or a mask or a scarf on her face , or with a hat and sunglasses.....traveling into another country under fake name, fake identity , en maxima discretion and starting a new life
Her parents will never know she is alive !
And that's my point
Or maybe she wants revenge ?
Becoming somebody worse than her own father , so after many years she comes back under fake gangster male identity she wants to kill him?
What do you think?
