lyssspotter

Hey Hey, I've been on a writing hiatus and have officially gotten back into the groove. I'm currently thirteen chapters into my next story and I'm hoping y'all will love it ❤️

rubeingfrrn

Hey I'm currently reading ghost of you and I absolutely LOVE it! I really like your writing style and the way you bring your characters to life. I love how you show their grief the way it is - long and everlasting, full of memories that bring both pain and joy simultaneously.
          
          I recently started writing a new book called The price of love. I'm only a few chapters in but I would appreciate it so much if you could have a look and maybe even give me some tips!

rubeingfrrn

No problem! Thanks for the feedback and I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far!
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lyssspotter

@rubeingfrrn I'm sorry it took me so long to get back to you!
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lyssspotter

@rubeingfrrn Hello! I just finished reading your story. I really enjoyed the characters and plot. You are a really good writer, my only critics are to separate out the paragraphs so it isn't just one long one. Number two, add a little bit more detail so that the readers can connect more with the characters! Other than that you are on track for a wonderful story ❤️❤️
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sadsongsandcoffee

Hi! I've just finished The Best Thing and I must say I incredibly loooove your story!! I love the complexity of Saylor's character throughout the ups and downs of deciding 'which boy is the better choice'. As for the boys, well, don't even get me started with Asher UGHHH he's a total d-bag of the century that sometimes I wish in the middle of the story Feyre is Greyson's not Asher's bcs that little girl deserves the best father (shout out to Cassius). 
          
          I just have one more complain: why did you have to kill Greyson  I literally BAWLED my eyes out. I was rooting and praying for both of them to finally get their HEA only to get my heart ripped out so cruelly??  Nevertheless, I get the beautiful messages and life lessons of this story.
          
          Overall, I reeaaaaallly enjoyed the emotional roller coaster of this story and the hours I sacrificed to finish it all (I spent 7 hours straight SKSSJSJ)!! Good job to you!!! 
          
          Sorry I'm ranting a lot I'm just so emotionally packed and need to let it out (I'm on my second day period sksksjsjs) 
          
          Looking forward to reading your other stories. Sending lots of love to you ❤️❤️

lyssspotter

@sadsongsandcoffee Ahh thank you so much! Messages like this are why I continue to write, I sincerely appreciate your kind words & support! ❤️
            
            Tbh I contemplated not killing Greyson off and toyed with the idea of giving them a happy ending. I went back and forth, but in the end decided too, to make the story a little more complex. I won't lie I sometimes wish I didn't lol. But I do love Cassius and it helped with the story I wrote for Feyre. I won't give any spoilers but there some things in that story that played off of the reason why I killed off Greyson! 
            
            I hope you enjoy my other stories and again, thank you so much for reading them and loving them. It means the world to me because my stories are like my babies.
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485rosita

Hey, I am sorry for posting this here, but I think this story has potential if you would like to check it out.
          
          The Talks We Have is a book in a series. It describes a blossoming friendship between an unexpected pair of university students. When this friendship is put under the lens of social media is up to them to decide what is going to happen next. Will they post their story or leave it in the drafts?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/352067460-the-talks-we-have