@m1tsuyaa_
by the way just letting everyone know who’s currently reading my story that i just published. it may take some time to post chapters because im usually busy with school and work, but also because im really lazy as well, lol. sometimes i have motivation and sometimes i don’t. so please be patient. i’ll try to release chapter 3 by tomorrow :>
new chapter posted!!
your work is already really good honestly hihi. like the phrasing, the flow, the way you describe scenes especially haruchiyo. it already feels nice to read and it doesn’t feel stiff or forced at all. i’m actually loving it so far because it feels easy to get into. especially the way you write the characters which is something a lot of stories struggle with. but i think one thing that could make readers even more hooked is adding character banners or visuals. like when readers open a chapter and immediately see the character’s face or aesthetic first, it catches attention so much faster and helps them imagine everything better. especially on wattpad where visuals really help keep readers interested.
i can help u with that, sweetheart.
hello! i’ve read your story, i liked it! please continue itt
Pls put your name in me
