maceface21

@HarryOtteronedirect I think you should stfu and leave. If you dont like her story, then leave. You don't have to say bad things about it. 

Don't you think maybe you have a sadistic view on the male race?  Compensating for something?  Not too bad could make the story line more believable to the reader by placing descriptive imagery and witty humor into the dialogue.  Just a though.  Overall, it's doable just not my type.