MissPinkElf1

Hey can you rate this I make it
          
          When I was a kid I always say "I will NEVER give up"
          
          When I was an adult I say " I'm GONNA win"
          
          But when I reach my seniority I remember those times and I think "but I GIVE up in the end"
          
          Many people will chase they're dream, but not always reach it. Some will achieve it and some will not, just like YOU and me who gave UP
          
          The moral of the story?
          
          "NEVER GONNA GIVE YOU UP"

MissPinkElf1

@mach504 YEAAH!!, WE ALL SHOULD NEVER GIVE UP!!!
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mach504

@EulaSimp505 
            Not that great at English, but you know how to get your words across.
            
            Little, mistakes but if anyone reads it, they can understand.
            
            Rate 3/5: It would be better if you stop between the lines and talk about your actions or listener's reactions when speaking this. You have a lot of room for growth.
            
            I'm never gonna give up, so you shouldn't as well.
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