Hey maddie, so I've finally read it. and I want you to know that I feel that its goin great!!! i see so much of your personality in the writing. you are very imaginative. I enjoyed reading it. you brought proud tears to my eyes....if I had one critique for you, just take your time and double check your spelling. welp, that's all for now, can't wait to read the next one. I love to the moon and back. Your Father.... Mr Duncan M. Warren