Syloe_

Hey, you've been voting on my story a lot. I really appreciate it as I've been thinking about quiting writing. If you have any constructive criticism I'd appreciate it.

madknees

@ Syloe2761  Hmm I don't really know what to say I'm more of a person who is just voting if he likes the chapter so I would say you are doing pretty good.
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hidden2blade

Wow, thanks for voting for my story, uhh thank I guess that would be the terms I give. What made you voting d'oh can I ask out of reason? Nothing serious just curiosity. And I hope that curiosity didn't kill the cat.... Ok I'm gonna stop now.  Thanks Anyway

hidden2blade

@hidden2blade, well I'm going to remake those 2 chapters so big changes will apply hope you can understand. And thanks by the way for reading it, it put ease in my heart and souls who read it... Ok, that ought to cringe when say it out loud, overall big thanks from me to you.
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madknees

@ hidden2blade  No problem. I'm enjoying your story very much. For now I would say chapters explain and I am not Angel were my favourites. I'm not much help if it comes to judging and criticising because I'm not writer myself so voting is the least I can do
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