@madladmaud
By better written I just meant what's happening makes more sense. It's easier to follow, im my opinion. I always felt as though while writing BP with Felix, it was hard to follow. And sorta all over the place. This one is a bit easier to follow, because I'm practicing and getting better at my writing while writing BP I wasn't very good, but you can see it get better as the story progressed and I hope to get even better.
posted a new story im working on based off a dream i had, in my opinion, its written better than burning passion, at least teh start is. burning passion was a partner project, and it is a lot of fun but i think i need to work on other projects. i love the story and its written really well, felix is a wonderful writter, but sometimes it was hard to play out tha actual story, especially the way we were writting it. i hope you guys decide to check out my new one!
thanks for 500+ reads on our story!
i’m going to be taking a hiatus from writing the story, as my partner for it is not currently able to help and we work as a team.
