mafiamarieee

I love you ! <3

I've read your book and it was good :)
          
          I wish that you could try and strengthen your plist , fix your grammars a little and try to separate the actions and the talk . Making the stories into paragraphs will make it easier to read
          
          But all in all , it was sweet ♡ Keep up the good work~

Hope you like it! https://www.wattpad.com/story/168385408