mafiyaqueen

Hyy 
          	How are you all 
          	 I am wondering that may be you all don't like my work but can you please tell me where I have to change in story please
          	
          	Its my first story so I don't know much about writing and story so sorry if I dispoint you 

mafiyaqueen

Hyy 
          How are you all 
           I am wondering that may be you all don't like my work but can you please tell me where I have to change in story please
          
          Its my first story so I don't know much about writing and story so sorry if I dispoint you