Crystal Heart ❄

Heya, thanks for discovering and reading the Brotherhood stories. Hope you enjoyed them. :)

@swetaraj199718 sorry , you got the wrong person

@recordpayne ok no problem 

You do know that if you read @oh_my_cash books and try to befriend her she's gonna ruin your life right?

Here's the second set of questions:
          
          Here's the second set of questions, sweetie:
          
          -What questions do you currently have? They can be about anything, from more information on the mate bond to Niall's past. I'm asking this so I know what I need to explain in future chapters. :) 
          
          -How were chapters five and six? Were there any awkward or unnatural parts? Did you see any GUM (grammar, mechanical, and usage) mistakes that made it difficult to read a passage? What is your overall view of AAJ so far based on the latest chapters (ex. Are you excited for future chapters, or would you like to see something change to make AAJ more exciting?)
          
          Thank you very much for allowing me to ask you these questions. Also, thank you for your time! ♥
          
          Stay perfect,
          Danny

Here's the first set of questions on AAJ:
          
          -Is Harry's speech comprehensible? If not, would you mind listing the chapter and sentence that are difficult to understand?
          
          -Is it easy to distinguish Harry's thoughts from his speech?
          
          -Is it easy to tell when Harry is in his spiritual form?
          
          -How is the plot developing? It it going too fast, too slow, or just the right way?
          
          -Were there any parts of AAJ that evoked confusion or did not make sense? If so, would you mind listing the chapter and place that caused confusion or did not flow right?
          
          -Do you have any predictions you'd like to share?
          
          -How were chapters five and six of AAJ?
          
          -How is AAJ overall?

Thank you for reading and commenting on AAJ! <3
          
          Stay perfect,
          Danny

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