theodoraanne17

I just finished reading your Mi amor. Honestly, it was actually a good read. And it had a good plot too. I just think maybe you can work on the way the story was written 
          For example, how did Isabella become Carolina? Why would Alex kidnap Ashley if he loved her so much? What magically happened to Dante? It's like you forgot his character. What does Alex have to do with Isabella/Carolina's death? The flashback was vague. Was it his men?
          I'm sorry if this is too much. I'm just a curious reader

theodoraanne17

@theodoraanne17 I'm happy you're happy. I'll be here for your next one too!🤸🤸
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magicallyperfect

@theodoraanne17 hello! Thank you so much for your honest feedback.it means a lot☺️
            Honestly this was the first story I wrote and i unpublished it many many times before actually letting it stay. I'll take note of all inconsistencies and edit it when time permit.😄
            Thank you for ur support.happy reading✌️❤️
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