Hello to anyone reading this!!! I'm looking for feedback and suggestions!
I’m currently writing a coming-of-age small town fiction on Wattpad and I would really love some honest feedback and suggestions from fellow readers and writers here.
I’ve already written several chapters and I’m now rewriting and strengthening the plot, characters, and pacing. I would love if some of you could read it and give constructive feedback on things like pacing and engagement, character depth, realism of dialogue and teen dynamics, emotional impact, overall plot direction.
https://www.wattpad.com/story/409217491?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=story_info&wp_page=story_details_button&wp_uname=wtfanuh
I just dropped the first part of my brand-new psychological sci-fi thriller — "The Loop Begins Again."
What if your future self was trying to warn you?
What if time was looping… and the end always started at the beginning?
This story is a wild ride of hallucinations, mysterious letters, identity twists, and a secret that could break the cycle — or trap you in it forever.
If you love:
Time loops
Psychological thrillers
Twisted mysteries
That feeling of "what did I just read?!"
Then this is your story.
Read Part 1 now — and if it messes with your head (in the best way), comment, vote, and share with your friends. Let’s grow this loop together.
Read now: https://www.wattpad.com/1533050338?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_published&wp_page=create_on_publish&wp_uname=HarshBhardwaj123#TheLoopBeginsAgain
Salut j’espère que tu va bien depuis le temps . J’avais juste une question car je lisais The wedding et tout d’un coup à partir du chapitre 15 c’est marquer que les chapitres on était supprimer tu ne les remettra pas ?