@jeonsubora you're absolutely right.....njaanum ath aalochikkaathe irunnillaa... first attempt aayond enganeyaa oru description kodukkundenn Idea illayirunnu. Porathenu own storyum allaa...appo ithinu match aaya oru description engane kodukkum nnulla chinthayaayirunnu..... anyway I am sincerely thanking for telling your suggestion and I will try to change that for sure ♥️♥️
@jeonsubora just oru suggestion aane "yadavam" - thnte description change cheydal nnanayirikum.. Prethikich readers nte oru point of view vech paryankl story description attractive ayal vayikan nnalla intrest avum.. Story e kurich cheriya introo pine kurch gap vitt adaptation anenm mention chythal nnayirikum.. Most of all ella readers prefer cheya short an elegant ayitulla intro ayirikumm.. Apoo views kudanum story kudthl perill ethanum sahayikum.