Montserathfulgencio

Your work sounds so interesting !! 
          I'll be sure to check them out >₩< 
          Thanks for the follow by the way 
          Feel free to read my work if interested.
          Have a nice day! 

mahima2345

Thanks you. I will surely check your work out.
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ChetnaSinghRS

You didn't follow me earlier, right? Hah! No issues. I know it was rule of HPAs, but i don't mind. 
          
          
          I as judge wanted to say it, just skip if you don't wanna read it (critiques):
          
          Start was good but the story is predictable and plain. Punctuation was an issue. Rest is fine. Don't get depressed if you don't win. Read and read and read. A good writer is firstly a good reader. (i think these are Mark Twain's word). Its my advice - Read more books of your interest, write short stories and non fiction articles, write until you're satisfied and then present it to the world. 
          
          Write just coz you want to! 

mahima2345

Yup thanks for the feedback tho
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