I have absolutely loved your story. It's so consuming and drenching in pain. I feel like why Manik and Nandini have to be this way? Can't something be done? But then I understand that nothing can be done. They can neither live with each other nor apart each other. Something this is how destiny bind us , doesn't it? I feel sorry for both but than I also realize that how strong they are. Their way of loving each other is different but they both are so honest and true to each other.Their love is enough for them. And that's how love is, right? Beautiful in every way .
I know this is just a story but I feeling so overwhelmed, I lost the count of number how many times I cried and the intensity with which you expressed every detail. But I really do wish that somehow in another parallel universe, they met each other, under different circumstances and find their way back to each other. Because they do deserve it . Please if you are planning to or thinking to write a squele, please do .