make_love_lunatic

Hello everyone! I just want to apologize for the wrong words I may have used when describing the characters in my story. I truly appreciate it, if you point them out right away, and if there are chapters you’d like to critique, I’d be very grateful for your feedback and suggestions.
          	
          	Please also bear with me, as I’m still a new writer and learning along the way. Thank you so much for supporting my very first story. Your encouragement motivates me to keep updating. Thanks again, and stay safe, everyone!

Aloshyvibes

@make_love_lunatic what makes a story better or lively in your POV
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LvDaSky

Ang sarap sa pakiramdam kapag may kaibigan kay masasandalan, makakasama at msasasabihan mo ng mga sama ng loob ano? Pero paano kong may namumuo na pala? Paano kong ang isa sa inyo ay may nararamdaman na pala na mas higit pa sa kaibigan?
          
          Sinubok ng panahon, kasi kahit naman na ano ang mangyari, mas pipiliin mo pa rin naman na umalis hindi ba? Kung para din naman iyon sa kapakanan mo? Kong para sa mga pangarap ng mga magulang mo?
          
          Magkakasakitan kayong dalawa, aalis ka. 
          
          
          Makakalimutan kaya ka niya? Kung ang pag-alis mo ay nagdulot ng dugo sa puso niya?Ang sarap sa pakiramdam kapag may kaibigan kay masasandalan, makakasama at msasasabihan mo ng mga sama ng loob ano? Pero paano kong may namumuo na pala? Paano kong ang isa sa inyo ay may nararamdaman na pala na mas higit pa sa kaibigan?
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/400251564?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=LvDaSky

make_love_lunatic

Hello everyone! I just want to apologize for the wrong words I may have used when describing the characters in my story. I truly appreciate it, if you point them out right away, and if there are chapters you’d like to critique, I’d be very grateful for your feedback and suggestions.
          
          Please also bear with me, as I’m still a new writer and learning along the way. Thank you so much for supporting my very first story. Your encouragement motivates me to keep updating. Thanks again, and stay safe, everyone!

Aloshyvibes

@make_love_lunatic what makes a story better or lively in your POV
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