makebelievebrodie

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I will try and post another part to Mute on Saturday to make up for being so shit with it xoxo

lukesXbumXisXyum

Thaks so much for the help! I've actually put up a couple chapters of the first book I've started. I would die if you checked it out! :D btw Mute gives me MEGA luke feels and i love it so much!! keep writing :( xx

makebelievebrodie

@lukesXbumXisXyum I will totally check it out, and thank you :) xx
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lukesXbumXisXyum

Hi!! I not new to wattpad and I read a lot of great stories on here, its inspired me to start writing my own! Yours are just FANTASTIC and I was hoping you could give me some tips on maybe what to write about or how to go about writing it?? I dont even know if youll see this but a girls gotta try right? :)

makebelievebrodie

@lukesXbumXisXyum Sorry I took so long to reply, I kept forgetting. Thank you for the feedback, I'm glad you liked my stories. 
            I don't know many tips, as far aswhat to write think of what you've enjoyed reading and pull parts from that, not coping but use it as a base and if you're still struggling listen to new music, that's supposed to get the creative mindset in place.
            When it comes to actually writing I'd say plan what you're going to write before you start writing, try not to make it cliche, I once heard someone say that if at any point you can predict what's going to happen then try and change it, I don't necessarily go by that but it's a good idea and try to vary vocabulary and punctuation (I used to use nothing but exclamation points) for example don't use 'said' or 'says' all the time vary with thinks like 'sighed' or 'spat' depending on tone. 
            That was pretty bad as far as tips go but I hope this helped xx
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