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And as for the comments about Taehyung, I just want to clarify—he’s not pathetic, not at all. He’s human. When people are in love, they can become vulnerable or even a bit unsure of themselves, but that doesn’t mean they lose their true character. Taehyung’s journey in this book is about showing that side of him, the part that’s willing to be vulnerable, to experience love deeply. There’s nothing wrong with vulnerability! That’s what angst is all about—the internal struggles, the emotional depth. I understand that some readers might expect him to be strong and stoic all the time, but that wouldn’t feel true to his character.
          	
          	Just like Jungkook, both of them have their own flaws and strengths, and that’s what makes them real. So please don’t expect me to change that! It’s not about making them "perfect" or "strong" in a conventional sense, but about portraying them authentically, with all their flaws and complexities.

xyz_crystal

@maknae_ffics_ Heyy you didn't quit book 2 right????
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xyz_crystal

@maknae_ffics_ Hey author I've just completed your book one and I'm on book 2 right now. Just wanted to know that you are continuing it right?? Btw loved the 1st book.

xyz_crystal

@maknae_ffics_ No worries I get it. Take your time.
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maknae_ffics_

@xyz_crystal  TYSM  yes I'm continuing the book.. the updates are late coz of some personal reasons.
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maknae_ffics_

And as for the comments about Taehyung, I just want to clarify—he’s not pathetic, not at all. He’s human. When people are in love, they can become vulnerable or even a bit unsure of themselves, but that doesn’t mean they lose their true character. Taehyung’s journey in this book is about showing that side of him, the part that’s willing to be vulnerable, to experience love deeply. There’s nothing wrong with vulnerability! That’s what angst is all about—the internal struggles, the emotional depth. I understand that some readers might expect him to be strong and stoic all the time, but that wouldn’t feel true to his character.
          
          Just like Jungkook, both of them have their own flaws and strengths, and that’s what makes them real. So please don’t expect me to change that! It’s not about making them "perfect" or "strong" in a conventional sense, but about portraying them authentically, with all their flaws and complexities.

xyz_crystal

@maknae_ffics_ Heyy you didn't quit book 2 right????
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itz_xyz

TO: maknae_ffics_
          
          SUBJECT: Appreciation for Seizures,Book1
          
          Hello, 
           I actually completed reading Seizures Book1 yesterday,&your writing is so good,really good.It’s been long time since I read a book and felt genuinely satisfied, because at some point most writers tend to mess up the concept.But when it comes to your writing style,I honestly liked it.
          
          The storyline,the characterization of the leads,the way you portrayed their emotional &physical states are absolutely fantastic.The novel clearly shows how talented you are.
          And as a reader even I expreinced so many emotions while reading, the way Jk is &how u have cleary showed Taehyung as a preson in love is really perfect.
          
          One aspect I especially loved about your writing pattern is that it has constant consitsency,clarity about characters like I’ve read books where characters suddenly turn completely opposite ,for example,if they start as green flags,they instantly become red flags just for the author’s convenience. But in your story,every character is written with a smooth,consistent flow from beginning to end.I never once felt any contradiction,and that is a huge element of perfect writing.
          
          Even in the end,JK didn’t suddenly turn into a green flag and apologize quickly just for closure,and you didn’t rush things for the sake of an ending.I’m not trying to offend you in any way,I truly admire you for maintaining character stability & u have shown it perfectly through Jk &Taehyung that there’s nothing wrong with a person having flaws due to their upbringing or health conditions.
          The ending is kind of perfect as a starting point for the next book.As a reader of your work,I can confidently say that you are highly skilled when it comes to writing. I hope you are doing well in your life,  I truly wish that this book reaches more readers and gets the appreciation .
          
          I really encourage you to write more such fabulous novels &I’m kinda waiting for the completion of Book 2 & Controle.
          
          With lots of admiration,
          itz_xyz

maknae_ffics_

@itz_xyz ✨ Thank you so much for your kind words and for appreciating my book! It honestly means the world to me 
            
            As someone who’s also a fan of FF, I completely get what you mean about character development. When a character suddenly changes their personality within just a few chapters, it can definitely be jarring and ruin the connection with them. When I started writing Book 1, I was really determined to avoid that—each character should feel consistent, even through the changes they go through. I wanted their personalities to evolve naturally, not in an unrealistic, forced way.
            
            I’ve been going back through Book 1, editing it and refining parts of it to make sure the dialogue feels real and that the emotions come across more authentically. I’ve only edited a few sections so far, but I’m really proud of how it’s improving.
            
            So TYSM ❤️
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