Moon_orchid_333

          Hey
          Sorry to bother you , if you have time please read my story and tell me about your thoughts  
          
          https://www.wattpad.com/story/409982656?utm_source=android&utm_medium=link&utm_content=share_writing&wp_page=create&wp_uname=Moon_orchid_333

malahan

@Moon_orchid_333 I'm not pondphuwin fan but I will read wangxian story dear
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theangrybetty

Hey tell me here 

theangrybetty

Do you prefer them to be stepbrothers since childhood, or as adults?
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malahan

@theangrybetty I want their relationship to be romantic they truly love each other,  but nani is deeply obsessed  with sky, he jealousy and controlling nature sometime make sky uncomfortable,  I open to any additional ideas you'd like to add.
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theangrybetty

So ermm, what do you think ? Is nani too cruel or what :( is this story good enough ? Hihi let me know 

malahan

@theangrybetty and the story so good you are good especially the way you describe nani characters I almost forgot it's a fiction it's made me think that real 
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malahan

@theangrybetty to be honest I was like what the f*** man he is monaster and Author I've finished the story, thank you for listening  to my ideas.  I really appreciate. keep writing 
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theangrybetty

Girl I just finished the story , I make nani so cruel thooo 

malahan

@theangrybetty  I'm curious, and I will give you my opinion after I read it .
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theangrybetty

I write all day ( no one bothers me hehe ) i was so focusss , but sure you can hadle it ? Hihi i make nani look so evil and sky kinda suffer (like you request)
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malahan

@theangrybetty what you are so fast  and sweet girl 
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theangrybetty

about your suggestions , then do you want sky to suffer or how nani is cruel right

theangrybetty

Okay i will write it for you since i have no works and free hihi . I will make nani as cruel as possible hihi and i will make sky suffer ( so bad) and a happy ending (ykyk)
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malahan

@theangrybetty yes I want sky suffer because of that he want divorce but nani didn't want let's go him and I want happy ending author 
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