Ivory_Knight7

Hey:) So literally the first thing I noticed was all the pleaaaase read my books and thaaaaanks and all of that. And then given what I was about type, I felt a little embarrassed. But oh well, wattpad's a struggling place and I'm just looking for some good criticism :D 
          
          Anyway, on with the rambling. I'm writing a fanfic based on The Bad Boy's Girl by JessGirl93. I've never written a fanfic based off a wattpad book, so its new territory for me. Its only five chapters, but I'd really really appreciate some feedback. 
          
          Would you mind taking a look? And comment and let me know what you thought? xD