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Ok made a decision for my book... I am basically rewriting chapters 2-5 a lot is comming out for the simple fact that I couldn't get it to flow properly in the direction I want. Ad always tell me what your thinking of it I would like to see your comments

O.k. I'm back! I went back and edited out some parts of the first five chapters because... well I didn't like how it flowed. I'm still looking for someone to do some serious editing because I'm looking at it with a biased view. Like always I want your comments on this book as of yet I've gotten very few. Also chapter 6 is looking to be short atm I got stuck in the hotel and couldn't figure out how to get out and move the story along... so... I'm just gonna do what I do best force it along. And again I really would like your comments if you want explanations on anything I'll put it in

@AllyanaM It's not that I'm doing a complete rewrite it's more like I wrote the whole first half of the book in 5 chapters and I am trying to go back to add more into the story not only to make it longer but to flesh out the characters.

Hi, just wanted to say thanks for taking a moment to read Mishaps and Wolves. I hope you enjoy it and if you need some help editing, I can try to help but I can't promise you much time because I have exams to think about too. Good luck with your rewrite!

I've come to the realization that my story has NO flow to it I'm just jumping from one thing to another right now. So I looking for help. I will be going back and writing this in third person to add more depth to it. What I'm need help with is someone going through and helping me edit it to help it flow better and where I need to add more detail. If you can help let me know

Okay ladies and gents, chapter five is up have fun and vote and comment please I'd really like to see the votes and what you think about my story so far
          

I've noticed something today. I have over a hundred reads on my book but almos no comments or votes. I want your comments so I can improve my writing. If you don't like what I put down or want me to explain or put in more details let me know this is a learning experience for me. Thanks everyone

Ok guy and gals I'm writing chapter five now and I'm thinking of finding a good editor. If you know of any let me know.

@DiamondTiranity Not yet, the art I have up for the book right now I stole from a website somewhere
           

Looking for someone to do cover art for my book