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I have read what you have posted up so far on your book and here is what I think (I'm not lying this is my actual opinion of your story):
          
          Interest: Your book was really interesting I enjoyed reading it.
          
          Grammar: You forgot to use the space bar a few times, there were words that should've been other words to make the sentence correct (etc. was and were) and there were a few times when the speech should've been on different lines but apart from that your grammar was fantastic.
          
          Overall: It was very good and I think that if I can, I might come back when you have written more and read your new bits in the story.
          
          Rating out of ten: 9

@possie9 thanks :)

Sure. I'll critique it soon.

Heyy :) wanna follow me on tumblr ? i follow back ! http://greenunicornsinhell.tumblr.com/ :)

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@TheFlump yeah sure :)

Do you want to fan, seen as you liked me horror stories, and I likes Turn me on? :) up to you ^_^

@Dedicatedxx I'll check it out on tuesday when my english exam is over :) just text me if i forget it :) 

Hey could you maybe read my book Beautiful Love? It would mean a lot to me if you could also fan:)

@eternalsoul No problem :)