I do not even know why you don't have millions of reads by now. Your story has everything: your writing style is amazing, the plot is so good, you have that suspense going on, and it's dramione.
But, nonetheless, it's such a good story, and it makes me feel everything , which is always hard to make in a book .
Continue writing like this, because you're extraodinary at it. You said it was your first story? That's the best first story of an author I've ever read...I think.
Anyway, just wanted to appreciate you . Especially since you like Harry Potter .