LSxing

Hi  would you mind giving my story “Doing life with my bff?” A read. I could use some feedback on people think. Thank you.  
          

malsfrey_fralachi

It’s rlly good!! You don’t need feedback, your doing great but u can make some chapters longer then usual which will hook readers to comment on ur posts like “please post more” and yeah!! 
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malsfrey_fralachi

Yes!! I would love to!!
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