manderz4

I'm writing another story but I dont want to post anything because I take a lot of time writing it and that wouldn't be fair. Its not that i get writers block, things just come to me and sometimes I have to wait for the urge to write for a really long time. If I rush writting it will turn out like the rape story and i dont want another bad, short story. Oh and the idea for this one kind of plays off that but noy really. 

Shelley2594

hey you.......yes you looking at screen 
          
          im kinda a newbe it would mean alot to me if you could take a look at my story, i know that they arent grate cuz i just started writing....... 
          
          see if you could tell me what you REALLY think like what im good at and what i need work on that would help SO much....... 
          
          because all the people that have read it say like 'good work' or 'keep going' but that dont help me get better so i would be really thankful if you did this... 
          
          michelle

manderz4

I'm writing another story but I dont want to post anything because I take a lot of time writing it and that wouldn't be fair. Its not that i get writers block, things just come to me and sometimes I have to wait for the urge to write for a really long time. If I rush writting it will turn out like the rape story and i dont want another bad, short story. Oh and the idea for this one kind of plays off that but noy really. 

manderz4

ok just read 13 reasons why by Jay Asher. It was so sad. It was a little confusing at first, but once I got used to his style of writing it was good. I recommend reading it. Its in a guys point of view. He gets these casette tapes from a girl that killed herself and they explain the reasons why she did it. Really good. You can find it on wattpad. Oh and if anyone knows were I can read speak by laurie halse anderson I would be very happy. They dont have it in the libraries near me and I have no money.

maryasha

OMG, the song that you sent  me is SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
          
          
          PERFECT
          
          for ch9 that i just posted. had another video with it, but Marianas Trench-beside you, is soooo perfect for the mood of this chapter, so i removed the last video i posted and put the one you sent, also i credited the ideas after you. Thx, the song was amazing :3